2019HSCExtended responsePast the Shallows — Favel Parrett

Q6 (d)

20 marks

Question

Prose Fiction
Favel Parrett, Past the Shallows
To what extent does the exploration of human experience in Past the Shallows invite you to reconsider your understanding of loss?

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Solution

Criteria	Marks
Evaluates skilfully the extent to which the text invites a reconsideration of the specified human experience<br> presents an insightful response with detailed analysis supported by well-chosen textual references from the prescribed text<br> writes a coherent and sustained response using language appropriate to audience, purpose and context	17–20
Evaluates effectively the extent to which the text invites a reconsideration of the specified human experience<br> presents a thoughtful response with analysis supported by well-chosen textual references from the prescribed text<br> writes an organised response using language appropriate to audience, purpose and context	13–16
Explains the extent to which the text invites a reconsideration of the specified human experience<br> presents a response with some analysis using textual references from the prescribed text<br> writes an adequate response using language appropriate to audience, purpose and context	9–12
Expresses limited understanding of ideas about human experiences represented in the prescribed text<br> describes aspects of the text<br> writes a limited response	5–8
Refers to prescribed text in an elementary way<br> attempts to compose a response	1–4

2019 HSC English Advanced — Paper 1

Supplied marking guidance · human reviewed

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Syllabus alignment

Common Module: Texts and Human Experiences

Texts and Human ExperiencesAnalyse and evaluate how texts use language to represent human experiences, qualities, emotions, anomalies, paradoxes and inconsistencies.

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